Flatter Guide
The characters often state exactly what they are feeling rather than letting their environment or actions reveal their internal state. To take this from a "flat" draft to a immersive experience, I’d suggest leaning into more sensory clues to ground the reader.
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The concept of tracking "token value" through distribution variance is a fresh take on speculative training. Clarity: The mathematical derivation of the -norm distance as a training proxy is rigorous. Areas for Improvement: The characters often state exactly what they are